Unfortunately, no one commented on my Elevator Pitch No. 2. Because of this, I did not receive any feedback on ways I can improve my Elevator Pitch. I was going to film my Elevator Pitch No. 3, regardless, but after relistening to my previous Elevator Pitches, there is honestly nothing else I would change. I have attached my Elevator Pitch No. 2 to this blog post so that, hopefully, I am able to get some feedback on it. Furthermore, I made some edits to the feedback section shown below. Thank you!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DjR0Ip7QbfY&feature=youtu.be
None of the feedback from my first Elevator Pitch really surprised me. One person told me I should talk about my products earlier on in the video so that I don’t lose my audience. Another person told me I should include some facts in my video so that the audience has a better understanding of just how serious the problem that I'm trying to solve is. I thought both of these pieces of feedback were very helpful. Based on this feedback, I made some changes in my second Elevator Pitch. I made sure to start talking about my products in the beginning portion of the video and I added in some facts to help capture the audience's attention.
Your pitches are private instead of unlisted. We can't watch them
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for letting me know! I honestly had no idea my elevator pitch was set to private. I changed it to unlisted in case anyone still wants to watch it and provide me with feedback. Thanks again!
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